What Others Are Saying
Read the experiences of authors I’ve worked with.
The feedback I’ve gotten is invaluable! You were to point out things I had no idea I was doing, and other things I thought I had gotten right but didn’t work well on the page or could be improved. I’ve learned so much already in the short time working with you and can already see how I can improve my manuscript and other books in the future. I would highly recommend others to work with you! You were professional, timely, and so sweet in this new (and somewhat scary) process.
Heather W., author of 2085: Ghost in the Code
Adult Sci-Fi/Dystopian, Developmental + Line Editing
Though I initially connected with Kayleigh for a developmental edit, circumstances caused me to choose the beta reading service for my particular situation and it did NOT disappoint!
She was very clear and very thorough with her notes and focused on the main areas I’d wanted extra clarity on. Very clear communication and easy to understand where my story struggled and where it shined. It was an invaluable investment and has already elevated my latest draft to a level I’m even more satisfied with.
Kevin Krause, author of Shadowbringer: The Fallen
Adult Fantasy, Skilled Beta Reading
I find your social media content relatable, which led me to read up on who you are as an editor. Your vibe, genre interests, and energy levels seemed to match mine, so when I saw a chance to enter a giveaway for your services, I jumped on it. From there, I decided to submit a piece I wrote several years ago that I am still in love with. But it is clunky and needs fresh eyes.
I had questions in mind for a beta reader to answer, and it was great that you called out that as a BIG part of my submission—what did I want to know about how you felt about my work?
Receiving your feedback, I was not surprised to find that many of the problems I knew existed were present but perhaps not as enormous as I thought. I was thankful to read your comments about how the piece was well suited for the young reader audience I was writing for. I was also glad you found the premise interesting as an adult and could see how kids would dive right in.
Overall, I like how much time you spent on the manuscript and how well-crafted your feedback was. After giving myself a few days to digest all you wrote, I am eager to jump back in, polishing my MG bug-collecting tale even more!
Brooke C., author of Eerie Collector
Middle Grade Fantasy, Skilled Beta Reading
I decided to work with Kayleigh because I was looking for accountability from an expert to make meaningful progress on a children’s book idea I had marinating. I loved brainstorming chapter ideas with her before getting started and appreciated her ongoing encouragement and support as I wrote.
While I knew going into working with Kayleigh that her feedback would be thorough, I was (pleasantly!) surprised by how incredibly detailed it actually was. I feel even more motivated to make progress on my writing after receiving her input and am excited to see what happens next.
Reading through Kayleigh’s feedback feels like seeing someone who is living out their calling. When I say she is good, she is really, remarkably good. If you’re looking for a true expert for your developmental editing, I can promise you that Kayleigh will deliver.
Jennifer Bangoura, author of Patchy’s Perfect Bed Adventure
Children’s book, Developmental Editing
When seeking a Developmental Editor, I wanted to find someone who would take care of my characters the way I would. Someone I could count on for constructive ways to make my story better. And my assessment of Kayleigh was right on the mark. She was that person and so much more. Kayleigh was both professional and personable through every step of the editing process. She made me feel comfortable handing my manuscript over to her. Based on her feedback, Kayleigh connected with my characters exactly how I’d hoped a reader would. And the feedback she gave me was exactly what I needed to make my story fully-rounded. I can’t thank her enough for what she’s been able to help me create.
Kerry Lussier, author of Just for Kicks (querying)
Young Adult Romance, Developmental Editing
I’ve worked with editors before who helped revise my work and sent me on my way. It felt more like a transaction than actual guidance. Kayleigh is so much more than that. I was interested in her 1:1 because I am new to the industry and I NEEDED guidance. She helped me see outside of my writing, made herself available with all of my follow-up questions, pushed me to put myself out there during a Pitch Party (also reviewed and helped polish my pitches) and gave me excellent resources to understand the publishing industry on a higher level. Kayleigh’s expertise and professionalism is invaluable. I am so grateful to have met her and I hope/plan to work with her more as I continue my career as a writer.
Danielle Griffith, picture book author (querying)
Picture Books, One-on-One Workshopping
Your ability to read between the lines and pull things into the forefront of all plot points was outstanding. The editorial report provided was thorough, detailed and went above and beyond. It helped strengthen my world building and characterisation to no end.
Your work and precision had made me a stronger writer and I would recommend your skill set to any and all. Thank you, Kayleigh, for being part of my writing journey.
Shelly Mack, author of Landis (released November 2023)
Young Adult Fantasy, Developmental Editing
Thank you for your time today. This is a valuable service you provide to indie [authors] looking to get started on the right foot.
Adam P., author and artist
Self-Marketing Strategy Session
I got connected with Kayleigh through a Reddit post I made questioning when was the right time to reach out to a professional editor during the self-publishing process. Her advice and feedback has been exceptional on all fronts. All communications with her were professional and educating. I went into the this process unsure of where to start, but she provided some great articles as well as answered any questions I had. I would absolutely recommend working with her on any project you may have!
Samantha Treat, author
Virtual Craft Chat, General Advice
Just wow. Your developmental edits are out of this world. Specific. Detailed. To the point. Yet still felt encouraging. Very directive.
Jen Lowry, boutique publisher
Multiple Manuscripts, Developmental Editing
You provide so much value. Your comments and suggestions are spot on.
Sally Simon, children’s book publisher
Picture Books, One-on-One Workshopping and Editing
Kayleigh is a skilled editor and has performed some good editing for me in the development of my first book. She was reliable, gave good advice, and provided quality work. I highly recommend her.
Rob Lutts, author of Winding the Stem
Non-fiction, developmental editing
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