Don’t Overuse Character Names in Dialogue

Don’t Overuse Character Names in Dialogue

Repeating character names throughout a conversation can come across as stiff and ingenuous. (Or worse! It could invoke memories of that old, terrible flirting tip that using someone’s name over and over when talking to them lets them know you’re really...
Improve Your Dialogue with a Mentor Text Exercise

Improve Your Dialogue with a Mentor Text Exercise

Mentor texts can be a great way to study rhythm and style within a beloved novel. (See my previous tip on using mentor texts.) They can also help writers who struggle with dialogue to learn the art of conversation within a story. Often a newer writer (or even an...
Deep Third-Person Point of View

Deep Third-Person Point of View

Deep third-person point of view is a form of limited third POV that immerses your reader in the experience of your character by removing most of the narrative voice. It can help bring a stronger sense of connection to the character, while also helping you clip longer...
Embrace Variation in Your Writing Style

Embrace Variation in Your Writing Style

Do you worry that your writing sounds robotic or monotonous? Sometimes when we’re learning to write or rushing to capture a scene on paper, we fall into repetitive structures that result in writing that is—sorry!—boring. While it’s true that some...
Organizing Your Developmental Revisions

Organizing Your Developmental Revisions

When transitioning from your drafting phase to revision, it can be useful to approach your changes from the biggest level of edits (plot holes, character development, etc.) first and work your way down to the smallest edits, like grammar and punctuation. In other...