Words like “very” and “really” are fine in conversation, but weaken your writing.
Instead, look for a strong adjective. Sites like Lose the Very and Word Hippo can help you find alternatives and expand your vocabulary.
Omniscience vs. Head-Hopping
What many don’t realize is that omniscient points of view are like a storyteller who can see your entire story from start to finish and is relaying it to your reader. They may tell everything, they may withhold for suspense, but however they (the omniscient narrator) chooses to tell the story, they are in essence a singular narrative voice who is delivering the tale to us.
